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Hayseed Huck
04-15-2010, 11:18 AM
Even the air hurt.

I was hung-over but clear and sane-- sane enough
to appreciate the sight of Tiffany's bare cheeks
an inch away from my face.

But right then all I wanted was relief-- and a Coca-
Cola laced with codeine. I want a warm Bloody Mary
too if I can mooch one off a cocktail girl, when I'm
in Vegas.

(Note-- the above construction is an example of the
rhetorical scheme prolepsis-- my favorite scheme of
all the schemes I like)

I'll know she has one because I could see it on the
tray she carries around. She looks confused. Maybe
the guy who ordered it left the casino and his
Bloody Mary behind.

Not me.

I would never ever leave a bloody Mary behind. In
fact, I'd let her walk ahead of me and if all the lights
went out, I could still find her-- easy.

I crave cognac.

Tiffany beside me moans.

I think she peed the bed sometime last night. If I
knew how fast pee dries, by some calculus, I could
tell the exact time.

All I know is something's wet.

I love Tiffany, so she can pee all the beds she wants
to, and I won't say one word to hurt her feelings. I
know she didn't do it on purpose to make me mad,
or anything like that. She was drunk for God's Sakes!
Leave her alone!

I know a lot of girls who tell me they get drunk and
pee the bed. Then they wonder if the guy they wake-up
with will be mad.

Not me.

I knew a fellow in Laughlin, Nevada who went by the
name, Pee-The-Bed Fred. He was, more or less,
a bum who slept every night under the Colorado River
Bridge that links Laughlin and Bullhead City, Arizona.

(See the irony here?)

All I know is I don't want to wake up with such a hang-
over I can't remember if I committed an unremembered
murder, which is only a little more comforting than to
remember murder.

Then comes the reality

I am resting my drugged-out, smelly body in pee and I
need a drink, bad-- a cold beer, a Greyhound, a Margari-
ta, or suicidal straight, eye-pinching Tequila.

Tiffany's eyes open. They look jaundiced yellow with
toxic glare. She sweeps a hand across her face and
picks away dried snot off the side of her nose. Quick,
she slides her hips away from the wet spot.

"Huh," she asks. "Did you, my sweetest lover of all
time, pee the bed?"

It comes to me, as in a dream induced by DeQuincey's
Levana that maybe I did pee the bed. Only two things
can cure a morning hangover and knowing who peed the
bed is not one of them.

Time is one. The other?-- your choice.

Oh, by the way, outside of a normal peeing of a bed,
there is only one other explanation that there's pee
in a bed.

Oh well. I'm going in to take a shower.


HH

MrRegular
04-18-2010, 01:25 AM
lol, I like it. It's almost a mystery.

Hayseed Huck
04-20-2010, 11:54 AM
Dear Okie from Harrah,

Tiffany says thanks.

I say it too.

HH

allislostfornow
05-01-2010, 12:34 AM
Ahh, I want to know what the other thing was!!!

Haunted
05-01-2010, 12:45 AM
Very engaging and entertaining. btw Blood Mary is my second best friend.

MrRegular
05-01-2010, 04:00 AM
I just reread this and I'd like to give you credit for pointing out something that I don't think I've ever heard before. That is the way romanticism can overcome even some of the grossest things. the way a woman can be beautiful in the morning despite dried snot on her face. I've often had a girl jump from bed to make her hair and face, but I often want to tell her not to worry, that her humanity is endearing (though I do believe I would think differently were she to take my words to heart and remain unkempt so throughout the day).

Alexander III
05-02-2010, 11:01 AM
Haha I loved it !!! The language worked perfectly as I wanted, nay needed to keep reading. Great read :)

Hayseed Huck
05-06-2010, 12:01 PM
Just returned from Vegas

to find

responses to my 'pee'

All responses compensated for a bad beat
in a Hold'em tournament at the Bellagio.

Thanks,
Hayseed

hillwalker
05-06-2010, 01:17 PM
Good to see your name on these posts again - your loss our gain.....