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Revolte
04-14-2010, 03:14 AM
You think I'm the prey
In your sick sadist game?
Beware, I'm a wolf
And this wolf has fangs.

You hop on my cloud
To threaten my glee,
Best watch your back
I've torn through my leash.

I'm sick of your hate
And Nazi like ways,
I'll fight like I did
When I was in A.R.A.

In the words of Mick Jagger
“Get off of my cloud”
I'm tired and sore
But strong and I'm proud.

So think twice, friend
I will not retreat!
I look down on violence
But I know no defeat.

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I dont usualy like to give explinations of my poems, it's so much more fun when people take their own impression of one, but in this case I felt should point out that A.R.A. is for Anti-Racist Action ( http://antiracistaction.org/ ) not the American Rental Association. I figured some people might be confused on what the A.R.A. is and the curious ones might google it and find the wrong answer.

dizzydoll
04-14-2010, 05:37 AM
Thats expressive Revolte, you wrote this with passion I see. :thumbs_up

Revolte
04-14-2010, 05:43 AM
Thats expressive Revolte, you wrote this with passion I see. :thumbs_up

Thanks. Yeah I was pretty ticked off when I wrote it. I've got myself a neo nazi phsycopath stalking me and it's getting the the point I'm ready to explode and yeah arg.. Ticks me off just talking about it lol.

dizzydoll
04-14-2010, 06:12 AM
Thats what I believe should make a good writer... coming from the heart. Direct experience [physical or researched fact] is always more compelling than ideologies.

Revolte
04-14-2010, 06:18 AM
Thats what I believe should make a good writer... coming from the heart. Direct experience [physical or researched fact] is always more compelling than ideologies.

That explains why "Tumble Weed" is the only short story I wrote that got any attention lol.

I do agree though, but sometimes its fun to mess with other stuff. Like Hawk's
monster poems are some of my favorites.