suicidal....very short stories

[freestory]

Second thought
Too high to jump, so he looked up for higher place for second opinion



The last idea
Sharp, brilliant and hot that bullet extracted from his bloody head.


Slow but effective
Nevermind, he said. Maybe the next time it going to work. He lights his cigarette.
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[dizzydoll]

My God... is this your first? It is I see. LOL please carry on dont let me stop you. :smilielol5:

[misterblok]

Not sure what DizzyDoll means, I hope it is a complimentary post, as I really enjoyed your piece. Can't suggest any improvements, apart from the wording of the first bit "for higher place" but maybe I've just not grasped it.

[dizzydoll]

oh wow, perhaps I misinterpreted it. I figured its dark humour, like playing with words. :eek6:

[freestory]

dizzy thanks for the comment and i dont think u misintepreted, very short story must have a space of interpretion

[freestory]

misterblock deeply gratfefull for the comment i really enjoy it,thanks