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Revolte
04-12-2010, 12:09 AM
How I hate this lonely venture
Off to nowhere's scenes,
To meet new love of vibrant youth
To tear me at the seams.

And if this path leads to destruct
My loving soul's ambition,
I must be a masochist
For in this I find passion.

I cannot say I love this life
Of finding love to lose,
Some times it's more then I can bare
It blackens out my hues.

But I must be so strongly cursed
To forever walk this path,
For hellish pain and lonely cries
Are all I ever have.

dizzydoll
04-12-2010, 02:30 AM
Good job Revolte. This is telling.... :thumbsup:

lallison
04-12-2010, 03:56 AM
It's good. A bit morbid and confessional. The rhyme and rhythm sound well worked out.