Thoughts and Feelings

[K K Srivastava]

Verbal manifestations
do make us go down
our huge wings
stand in the middle,
a piece of dust makes
us feel safer: yet another
subdivision unrelents.
Time and again,
it happens
and it happens again
unread are the patterns in
the hysterical disassociation
temptable remains our
jeweled stupidity.

*

There are feelings
with no thoughts
there are thoughts
with no feelings;
we stand dismayed
crowd is dismaying indeed.
Curious thinkers
buttonhole their thoughts
with no feelings
and their feelings
with no thoughts.
They are the think-tank
of modernity,
defining the contours of
human illusions.

[dizzydoll]

That second little verse is so true and so fatal at the same time. Your first verse is very clear...

unread are the patterns in
the hysterical disassociation
temptable remains our
jeweled stupidity.

explains just how stupid we are. Right now I am focusing on the law of attraction, both these verses fits the mood of that completely.

Good job. :thumbs_up

[K K Srivastava]

Thanks, friend for reading and responding. Regards

KK

[Revolte]

I liked this! The word usage reminds me alot of something Jim Carroll would write.

[lallison]

Very abstract with some interesting and catchy phrases.