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PrinceMyshkin
04-09-2010, 09:30 AM
My neghbour, George,
was brought to court
for “hugging with intent.”

He only meant,
he said, a friendly squeeze
to which the plaintive retorted:
“Puh-leeze!”

Buh4Bee
04-09-2010, 11:15 AM
Love how you have made this into an extra! extra! read all about it by your title.

Hawkman
04-09-2010, 11:26 AM
Well, I doubt if this will shake the literary establishment, but it made me laugh. Nice one.

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blazeofglory
04-09-2010, 12:42 PM
My neghbour, George,
was brought to court
for “hugging with intent.”

He only meant,
he said, a friendly squeeze
to which the plaintive retorted:
“Puh-leeze!”


A masterly work! How beautifully you have woven this piece! How it satirizes the suppressed humor, though at times seemingly dirty, but in reality full of beauty

PrinceMyshkin
04-09-2010, 04:00 PM
Thanks Hawkman, Jersea and Blazeofglory.

dizzydoll
04-09-2010, 04:05 PM
Thats a fun poem, I read it like George was accused of sexual harassment in the workplace, perhaps. lol. I enjoyed it.

AuntShecky
04-10-2010, 02:02 PM
Of course, the question that begs to be asked:
"With 'intent' to what?"

Virgil
04-10-2010, 08:00 PM
Of course, the question that begs to be asked:
"With 'intent' to what?"

Well, that's open for you to speculate. :wink5:

Very enjoyable Prince. :)

PrinceMyshkin
04-11-2010, 03:54 PM
Thanks, dizzydoll, Aunt Shecky & Virgil.

lallison
04-11-2010, 10:54 PM
Very cute