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Revolte
04-09-2010, 03:49 AM
You say that I'm rich
And my bag's filled with gold.
You call me a fool,
When I refuse what I'm told.
You say I'm a brat
And I'm weak and not strong.
You call me a child,
When I said that your wrong.
You say “it's just life”
And I have to grow up.
You call me so blind,
When I say I'm fed up.
But what you don't know
Is all you deny,
Will come back to kill you
With eye for an eye.

blazeofglory
04-09-2010, 03:56 AM
This is really interesting. There is a fusion of imagination and art in your poem. It is a marvelous piece. You have really dispelled the myths thru your poem

dizzydoll
04-09-2010, 04:40 AM
Well ain't that the truth? I enjoyed this poem, thanks for sharing. :D

Revolte
04-09-2010, 04:53 AM
Thanks you two!