Black silk dress

[Biggus]

Her black silk dress
Fitted her like a sheath
The taut lines showed
Her nakedness beneath

Save for black-stockings
Gartered at the thigh
Stimulating to the loins
And pleasing to the eye

She turned every head
With her glamorous allure
Filled each one with thoughts
None of which were pure

[Hawkman]

I nearly missed this, it sort of just sneeked in without my noticing. I'm glad it didn't get away though. Nice one. H

[hack]

Good write Biggus!

[Buh4Bee]

I'm sure even the women who saw this woman had a thought or two about her. Exactingly vivid. Don't all women wish we were this woman. Now that's real power...

[Il Dante]

Her black silk dress
Fitted her like a sheath
The taut lines showed
Her nakedness beneath


In this verse all the lines begin with an unstressed syllable except the second: "Fitted her like a sheath." Might consider changing that line to match the meter of the lines above and below. :Chevy_anim:

I like that you chose "black" as the color; it gives an interestingly sinister undertones and give a certain disconcerting feel to it all.

[summer grace]

Nice poem.. really conveys a image.

[Biggus]

Thank you all

[lallison]

I like how it fits her like a sheath, makes her sound like a deadly weapon. Hot and clever!

[Biggus]

Thank You