Fess up

[dizzydoll]

.

Yo?
why lie
what is so bad
that you need to hide.
Let go
what pains you so
i’m on your side
you know.
So?


More simple sentiments, this time with a secret message.

[Buh4Bee]

I kinda like this. It's obviously written for someone specifically, so many may not get the secret message. That aside, it flows with lovely symmetry.

[dizzydoll]

You're a sweetheart, thank you jersea. :smile5:

[lallison]

I like its reflective qualities, and the sentiment in a kind one too, although it does read a bit like hip-hop.

[dizzydoll]

Thank you for always offering words of encouragement Iallison. I suppose it does look rather hippy-hoppy, lol. even tho I am certainly not from that generation [gratefully so]. :D