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Dark Muse
04-03-2010, 11:21 PM
Vibrance of Spring

The breath of warm wind
a gentle voice in my soul
now Persephone rises.

Flowers bloom again
beneath fingers of the rain
feel the vibrations of life.

Quarter Moon
04-04-2010, 01:33 AM
Very nice poem. I like the fact it is easy to read. Thank you for sharing. Nice Piece. Love Maureen

Dark Muse
04-04-2010, 01:39 AM
Thank you!

paradoxical
04-04-2010, 11:52 AM
Yes, this is very nice. I like it a lot.

lallison
04-04-2010, 11:40 PM
that's great. I love the soft feeling of it, just like springs gentle warmth. Also, the allusion to Persephone is nice. The Greek myths are always fun to muse about.

Dark Muse
04-04-2010, 11:41 PM
Thank you!