CatherineS
03-29-2010, 01:09 PM
Hey
I'm wondering if you could help me on structure by analyzing this first paragraph by saying how the writer introduces both the characters?
I'm really stuggling with this...
"The two women - one fat and one thin - sat at the window of the thin woman's house drinking tea and looking down the road which ran through the village. They were like two birds, one a fat domestic bird perhaps, the other more aquiline, more gaunt, or to be precise, more like a buzzard"
Thankyou!!
I'm wondering if you could help me on structure by analyzing this first paragraph by saying how the writer introduces both the characters?
I'm really stuggling with this...
"The two women - one fat and one thin - sat at the window of the thin woman's house drinking tea and looking down the road which ran through the village. They were like two birds, one a fat domestic bird perhaps, the other more aquiline, more gaunt, or to be precise, more like a buzzard"
Thankyou!!