Generation No

[Revolte]

White painted wall of boredom
Shot up your vain a cast,
A stale and centered vessel
That lives to eat your trash.

Be clean, be wise, be safe
But don't dare to live at all,
And if you do defy this
As sure as death you'll fall.

When new friends ring your bell
Keep far from that barred door,
They may wish to take you out
And you'll be clean no more.

I swear to you young dames
A nomad's life is grand,
You'll never have to worry
If you paint the world bland.

[markosf10]

mmmnn.. that sounds good...

be wize resonates.... but it's too late to be wise now.

[Nax]

This poem makes me think of beige. I hate beige. Who was looking at brown and was like "
WOOOOW thats way to intense, better tone it down there!"

[lallison]

As sure as death you'll fall. I like that line and I like the theme of this poem. It has both rhyme and wit.

I'm not sure if Generation No is a fitting title. I don't think guardians of the status quo are confined to one generation.

[Revolte]

As sure as death you'll fall. I like that line and I like the theme of this poem. It has both rhyme and wit.

I'm not sure if Generation No is a fitting title. I don't think guardians of the status quo are confined to one generation.

yeah I really dont like the title honestly, but im horrid at coming up with titles :nonod: