Depression

[Revolte]

This lonely heart still cries
Those lonesome tears I dread,
And days of love and joy
Did only halt the led,
From freezing bullets stab
Shot through the gun of hope,
Sped through the wind to heart
And in my blood I choked.

[Hawkman]

Hi Revolte, This is neat compact and communicative and it reads well. I really like it, Thanks. - H

[psychofemale]

Wow! I can relate! Awesome

[Nax]

Never stop writing in rhyme man.

I love the way you bounce thro a poem. Always easily read and always enjoyed.

[Revolte]

@Hawkman haha your welcome, and thank you too.

@Phsyc well that makes it worth the write :)

@Nax haha thanks man, I'm pretty stuck on using rhyme. It's how I wrote when I was a kid.