Time

[anzki4]

Time

Minute by minute,
hour by hour.
Time has no limit.
Nothing can fight its power.
Time rules everything,
Time rules it all.
It tells you when go sleeping.
It tells you when to fall.

With Time you can`t wage.
Time will rule your age.
You can`t run away from Time.
And it will sound your last chime.

[Revolte]

Time

Minute by minute,
hour by hour.
Time has no limit.
Nothing can fight its power.
Time rules everything,
Time rules it all.
It tells you when go sleeping.
It tells you when to fall.

With Time you can`t wage.
Time will rule your age.
You can`t run away from Time.
And it will sound your last chime.


This one speeks to me. I always had an issue with the idea of time, and there is a tragity to it that you really cant escape. You captured that, even if that wasnt the intent, in the final lines.

[Stain]

This is interesting. I like how you present time as an absolute force, and how we all are slaves to its power.

[anzki4]

Thank you for your thoughts both.


This one speeks to me. I always had an issue with the idea of time, and there is a tragity to it that you really cant escape. You captured that, even if that wasnt the intent, in the final lines.

How wonderful it would be,
to travel back in Time.
Just once again you could see,
the world with the eyes of a child.

[anzki4]

Thank for YOU for reading it, and for comment.

[Mfdoom]

I share similar ideals about Time and how we are forced to follow its law. It puts the idea that there is a countdown since our birth to prouve our worth in this battleground. A great poem!

[anzki4]

Well thank you:)