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Mariner
03-17-2010, 07:52 PM
Thought this up at work the other day. It keeps me occupied. I love this one, it's fun.

Infectious.

The meanest thing
that she ever did
was look at me
with one shy grin
and let out a big ole' yawn

doesn't she know
how contagious they are?
'cause now she's got me
all tired and...

yaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwaaaaaaaaahhhhhh

lallison
03-18-2010, 09:40 AM
I like it, but I don't think you even need the last three lines to get your meaning across.

Insightful, keep it up