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This essay is for my Human Relations class. My major is medical administrative assistant. I must answer these questions in my paper:

 Future career aspirations in general
 Personal strengths that make me best suited for my career
 Knowledge skills and behaviors I posses to maximize my talents
 What role effective intrapersonal and interpersonal communication play in your future success?

INTRO:

I have toiled with the idea of pursuing different careers after my graduation from college. One goal is to become certified as a medical coder and work in a hospital. In this role my personal strengths, knowledge, skills and behaviors I possess that will maximize my talents and effective intrapersonal and interpersonal communication are imperative to my future success.