Revolte
03-14-2010, 04:30 AM
I rewrote it again, this is the final version. I've spent too much time on it now I gatta move on lol
Abstract walls had sang,
songs of fear and blight
while unconscious as a corpse,
came the day I died
My spirit had tread the land,
of sorrow, loss, and pain
for on the day I died,
came hateful songs I sang
But days had come and gone,
spent sat in silent caves
now a mourning memory,
is all that day remains
Abstract walls had sang,
songs of fear and blight
while unconscious as a corpse,
came the day I died
My spirit had tread the land,
of sorrow, loss, and pain
for on the day I died,
came hateful songs I sang
But days had come and gone,
spent sat in silent caves
now a mourning memory,
is all that day remains