anzki4
03-12-2010, 08:35 AM
Where it all started ?
What was the first poem you have written ?
I doesn`t necessarily be first poem you have written, but rather first poem you have written after you have interested in writing poems.
So it isn`t necessarily have to be poem you written for example in school.
:blush5:Here`s mine:
I and He
When I watch him,
I can see his rage.
His rage, deep in.
Imprisoning him like a cage.
When I listen him,
I can hear his pain.
His pain, deep in.
Wishing for what he never can gain.
When I smell him,
I can smell his fear.
His fear, deep in.
Nearly pushing him over the rear.
When I touch him,
I can feel his love.
His love, deep in.
Guiding him from above.
When I think of him,
I can think about his wish.
His wish, deep in.
His only one; to end all this.
And one thing I know,
he never can win.
Yet, he doesn`t give in.
What was the first poem you have written ?
I doesn`t necessarily be first poem you have written, but rather first poem you have written after you have interested in writing poems.
So it isn`t necessarily have to be poem you written for example in school.
:blush5:Here`s mine:
I and He
When I watch him,
I can see his rage.
His rage, deep in.
Imprisoning him like a cage.
When I listen him,
I can hear his pain.
His pain, deep in.
Wishing for what he never can gain.
When I smell him,
I can smell his fear.
His fear, deep in.
Nearly pushing him over the rear.
When I touch him,
I can feel his love.
His love, deep in.
Guiding him from above.
When I think of him,
I can think about his wish.
His wish, deep in.
His only one; to end all this.
And one thing I know,
he never can win.
Yet, he doesn`t give in.