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Quarter Moon
03-11-2010, 07:15 PM
Laying down, and as I fell asleep.
I dreamt that I was in deep, dark, dense space.
When all of a sudden there was a big explosion.
And pieces of fire shot out every which way.
Then started forming planets.
Waking up amazed and awe inspired.
I asked God "What does all this mean?"
Later I learned that those fiery pieces are called planetesimals.
Stumbling across an Astronomy book .
I learned it's how planets were formed.
God is there with each and everyone of us,
wanting to share His Universe.
which is awesomely made.

Buh4Bee
03-12-2010, 09:28 AM
I really like your styke of writing in free form. I write in a very similar way. Do you write short stories? You may like to write them, as this poem tells a simple story. I also like to explore my concepts of religion through my writing.

Quarter Moon
03-13-2010, 03:09 PM
Thank you for reading my poem. Yes I write short stories. Writing is my life.
I find my most enjoyment in life by writing. I am sure you do to. I am having a hard time finding where to review on this site. I know how to enter but reviewing is a hard find for me. Looking foward to reading you. Love Maureen