On The Road To Damascus

[Quarter Moon]

The mad men ran their horses.
On the road to remorses.
With passion for death,
and ears that were deaf.
They rode towards Damascus.
Bright light knocked their horses back,
compassion was their lack.
Saul named Paul had his history sacked.
Blind and out of mind.
Oh waning heart for God to start!
Change us too on the road to Damascus.

[PrinceMyshkin]

Complex - but very witty!

[Buh4Bee]

This one shows the kind of writing you can do as compared to the poem about spring. It may be the subject matter. When one is really into the subject the writing tends to be better. Nice one!