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Quarter Moon
03-11-2010, 06:45 PM
Dear Spring

You finally arrived.
I was looking forward to seeing you again,
Because I love you.
You are so beautiful.
Decked out for your Lover.
Red , green , purple , and yellow too.
Orange, pink, white and blue.
I will embrace you.
And kiss the morning dew that sits .
Softly upon your hair.
Spring is here, and I feel alive with your love.
Birds singing In the leaf filled trees.
Their songs bring me joy.
Blossoms on the branches waft their fragrance.
It feels my senses.
Spring, it is you that I love.

Buh4Bee
03-12-2010, 09:24 AM
I can relate to this poem as I was contemplating a version similar to this. It however, sounds rushed when you wrote it. You may want to spend more time editing it.