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hack
03-10-2010, 03:12 PM
remembering us
and high hopes on the freeway
balanced by the rain
PrinceMyshkin
03-10-2010, 03:23 PM
Oh, man! I love the pared-down elegance of this!
Dark Muse
03-11-2010, 12:54 AM
I loved this, very nicely done!
Hawkman
03-11-2010, 06:51 AM
Nice haiku, hack.
Bar22do
03-11-2010, 11:20 AM
remembering us
and high hopes on the freeway
balanced by the rain

an earring of a poem, hack!