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PrinceMyshkin
03-09-2010, 04:36 PM
No poem came to me that night.
Instead, I slept, a deep sleep.
I might even say an elegant sleep.

And in the morning
I remembered no dreams

Hawkman
03-09-2010, 07:37 PM
Hi Prince. This reads like the end of a story, but you have left us to write our own. With such an ending, haunting and eloquent, I feel compelled to fill the void - but with what?
with these five lines it could be either comedy or tradgedy - the choice would depend entirely on my mood at the time I think.

H

Dark Muse
03-10-2010, 03:13 AM
I loved this, quite different indeed and I thought the irony behind it was great.

PrinceMyshkin
03-10-2010, 03:25 PM
Hi Prince. This reads like the end of a story, but you have left us to write our own. With such an ending, haunting and eloquent, I feel compelled to fill the void - but with what?
with these five lines it could be either comedy or tradgedy - the choice would depend entirely on my mood at the time I think.

H

My bad! I meant to precede it with my entire autobiography.