Homeland in winter

[peter7805]

The snow,the woods and my silent homeland

How many missings and thoughts I have in mind

In this winter ,it keeps the warmness of the sparrow

My cold fingers are warmed on the fire of charcoal

In the arms of snow life falls,like a fire it runs

And how many times in the night，the snow dances

My heart leans on the earth wall so close

And I heard the wind through the pipes of the stove

On shining days, the birds fly across the window

The broken kite is still hanging on the willow

Oh, on the powerline sticks some little sparrows

My mind runs all the way to homeland faraway

I saw smoke rises from the chimney and floats away

Oh,my homesickness hurts when I missed the footprints on snow today

[Mfdoom]

I really liked the way you speak about snow. Being from montreal, I sort of have the same feeling towards it. I really liked this piece :D

[PrinceMyshkin]

I especially liked these lines:


On shining days, the birds fly across the window

The broken kite is still hanging on the willow

Oh, on the powerline sticks some little sparrows

My mind runs all the way to homeland faraway



Thank you.

[NisreenS]

"And how many times in the night，the snow dances

My heart leans on the earth wall so close

And I heard the wind through the pipes of the stove

On shining days, the birds fly across the window

The broken kite is still hanging on the willow

Oh, on the powerline sticks some little sparrows

My mind runs all the way to homeland faraway

I saw smoke rises from the chimney and floats away"

Very beautiful...thank you very much.

[NisreenS]

And how many times in the night，the snow dances

My heart leans on the earth wall so close

And I heard the wind through the pipes of the stove

On shining days, the birds fly across the window

The broken kite is still hanging on the willow

Oh, on the powerline sticks some little sparrows

My mind runs all the way to homeland faraway

I saw smoke rises from the chimney and floats away



Very beautiful. Thank you.