Glacier134
03-07-2010, 06:32 AM
This is not a project, I just want to create a profile that has different points of view and situation about Love-life and friendship. This is written by my friend, he's just in 9th grade, and English is his 2nd language, so the writing cannot be perfect (or FAAAAAAAAR FROM perfection). If possible I hope someone generous can help edit and MOST IMPORTANT OF ALL!!! :D Reply your points of view ;D, thank you very much. (And the material is not real, he just sees this in his daily life from people around him and write this.)
Love and Friend - Is there a world in which both can exist at the same time? For friend is a mist covers me with confusions, and love is a rain that clears everything up but along with that, it brings me sadness. I dream of a world that Friend and Love can co-exist inside this life, for me to know what it is like to have a true friend, and also love that person. But that imaginary world of mine is impossible, reason being most men including me do not deserve such great blessing of life and fate.
In this sad life I have fallen in love many times, to an extend faces pass me by with no memory of who and what they are. Some tell me that love does not exist in my life, mine alone. I am not but an object God creates to amuse himself. My sufferings are their joys, and for times I have sought the Devil to take away my soul. Take me away from the lust within, and gives me pleasure of death. I would be his servant for eternity. Not because I betray God, but God has betrayed his own creations. He lets me taste the perfect fruit of love and take my right to earn it forever. He puts a curse on me; my fate shall never have the color of the great blue sky, but red from blood and darkness of despair for eternity. I have found many friendships that do not last very long, and have heard many stories of ever-lasting love and friends. I dream of a world in which I would have my real feelings and emotions, without being chained by uncertainty and self confidence. Why for so much hate, God has brought me to this sad world, and leave me here without giving me a taste of sweetness of life.
These words cannot express all my grief, my life is a big desert, wide, ever-lasting, but dried and filled with pain it brings to those around me. I get false love and pretense from those who claim to know me and great hatred from those do not walk my path. Our beliefs are different, and for that reason alone those who walk my way are differentiated from trashes and dust.
Love and Friend - Is there a world in which both can exist at the same time? For friend is a mist covers me with confusions, and love is a rain that clears everything up but along with that, it brings me sadness. I dream of a world that Friend and Love can co-exist inside this life, for me to know what it is like to have a true friend, and also love that person. But that imaginary world of mine is impossible, reason being most men including me do not deserve such great blessing of life and fate.
In this sad life I have fallen in love many times, to an extend faces pass me by with no memory of who and what they are. Some tell me that love does not exist in my life, mine alone. I am not but an object God creates to amuse himself. My sufferings are their joys, and for times I have sought the Devil to take away my soul. Take me away from the lust within, and gives me pleasure of death. I would be his servant for eternity. Not because I betray God, but God has betrayed his own creations. He lets me taste the perfect fruit of love and take my right to earn it forever. He puts a curse on me; my fate shall never have the color of the great blue sky, but red from blood and darkness of despair for eternity. I have found many friendships that do not last very long, and have heard many stories of ever-lasting love and friends. I dream of a world in which I would have my real feelings and emotions, without being chained by uncertainty and self confidence. Why for so much hate, God has brought me to this sad world, and leave me here without giving me a taste of sweetness of life.
These words cannot express all my grief, my life is a big desert, wide, ever-lasting, but dried and filled with pain it brings to those around me. I get false love and pretense from those who claim to know me and great hatred from those do not walk my path. Our beliefs are different, and for that reason alone those who walk my way are differentiated from trashes and dust.