This is the world that I have seen

[peter7805]

This is the world that I have seen

The heaven and the hell betweeen

The war and the blood come to scence

Killings are everywhere and lives faint

The dry rivers and the cold wind

The snow freezing and the gray plains

The rich and the poor ,people all struggle in vain

Can they protect themselves,humanbeings

Who can save them out of here, all these pains ?

Love and hate, goodness and sins ,darkness and rain

No dreams and no imagination and just ruins

The dust on heart who will clean

Oh this is the world that I have seen

It is the end but where do i begin

[dizzydoll]

I like this, I've no idea why no-one commented on it before now. It tells of a sad reality we live in but do not all see. :toetap05: Nice work.

[blazeofglory]

This is the world that I have seen

The heaven and the hell betweeen

The war and the blood come to scence

Killings are everywhere and lives faint

The dry rivers and the cold wind

The snow freezing and the gray plains

The rich and the poor ,people all struggle in vain

Can they protect themselves,humanbeings

Who can save them out of here, all these pains ?

Love and hate, goodness and sins ,darkness and rain

No dreams and no imagination and just ruins

The dust on heart who will clean

Oh this is the world that I have seen

It is the end but where do i begin

You seem to be very agonized at heart and of course this is what all of us feel in this world. This is what we watch on TV, read in newspapers. Yet life goes on and on and one endlessly. You and me are still alive and share ideas, and love and romance go under the horns of the mighty time and space that are taxing us all the time and belittling our existence. Of course compared with the stretches of time and space our existence seem insubstantial but yet our life goes on and we forget death for a while and crushed by the weight of time and space we still feel immortal

I like the poem