On A Wing

[Alexander III]

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[Buh4Bee]

This is so lovely and upbeat. It put's one in a great mind state to read it. I'll even say I like the structure.

But can't you change the grey heath to at least purple or green? :reddevil:

[MorpheusSandman]

Such a rich piece. I love how the combination of the language and images really sweeps the reader to the places being described. My mind feels like its flying when I read it; and that's a real accomplishment. I even love the archaic touches which give the piece just the right spice of remoteness but doesn't detract a bit from the reading.

[Alexander III]

Thank you both :)