Oh dreary winter

[Biggus]

Oh dreary winter
You have over stayed
Your grey skies
Are not welcome
I know spring is close
I look at the grey lake
With the duck on it
The only splash of colour
In the late winter landscape
But I see the hints of spring
Everywhere around me
And the promise of daffodils
Lilacs and butterflies
So winter its time to go
Your welcome is worn out

[MorpheusSandman]

Hmm, I don't know about this one. There's an abruptness in the rhythm that seems to start and stop. It's very staccato and seems to jump from image to image too ruggedly.

[Buh4Bee]

I have to agree with Morpheus. However, it seems to just a fun poem.

[Biggus]

Back to the drawing board for this one then