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JTParreira
02-12-2010, 09:53 AM
The mirror divides us
our pieces
on the ground

while the fingers
they bleed from glass's fury

A broken mirror
branches
of the same whole face
dispersed in silver

The cherry-tree
of the photo frame is intact.

J T Parreira

firefangled
02-12-2010, 12:17 PM
I really like the animation and the contrasting stillness this provides. It also seems to say something about vanity.

blazeofglory
02-12-2010, 12:55 PM
This is really a very interesting poem and here the tragic situation of a person is so beautifully put forth. Of course the craftsmanship of the poet is unquestionable in fact

paperleaves
02-12-2010, 03:06 PM
wow. something about the last two lines is strikingly powerful in complement to the already tragic yet breathtaking piece.
thanks!

love
Kate

Alone
02-12-2010, 04:08 PM
The way you described the reflected emotions was sparkling . Really liked it.