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Biggus
01-27-2010, 08:44 AM
I want to inhabit forever
That special place that dreams fill
That safe and cosy place
Beneath the duvet in Snooze Ville

Between wake and slumber
A place that fulfils wishes
Where lover’s hands are held
And lips deliver stolen kisses

A place where dreams come true
Where loved ones live forever
A place where all is forgiven
And success comes with any endeavour

Where you can embrace forbidden lovers
Sweet moments of utter bliss
Or be together again with first loves
With kisses and caresses to reminisce

I want to inhabit forever
That special place that Dreams fill
That safe and cosy place
Beneath the duvet in Snooze Ville

Bar22do
01-27-2010, 09:30 AM
... and this one could make a beautiful song!

firefangled
01-27-2010, 10:21 AM
I agree with Bar. This is very songlike. It is also where I wanted to remain this morning.

MorpheusSandman
01-27-2010, 11:05 PM
I'll echo the above; very lyrical. It definitely captures that kind of twilight between sleep and awake. I love idea of personifying it as "Snooze Ville".

Biggus
01-28-2010, 04:58 AM
Thank you all