Open-air market

[Khe Iem]

OPEN-AIR MARKET

By Khe Iem

dusty
disorderly, sunny and windy

breaths of days madly singing

listening
eliminating everything

fluttering, fluttering
birds fly about

beware of twilight
closing the door

Translated by Dovinh
Edited by Carol Compton

[PrinceMyshkin]

How casually, almost absent-mindedly this approaches that dramatic, haiku-like conclusion.

[tailor STATELY]

Very nice; and 3-credits too !