Memo To A Maiden Moving Out

[Dinkleberry2010]

xxxxx

[Amylian]

I like the transient nature of your poem.

"But spiritually I know
you'll never go away"

This one is, to me, worth a look as it really defines the essence of your faith, your belief that what you desire, inside your spirit, your will, will never be parted from you...

Regards,
Ali Makki aka Amylian

[Dinkleberry2010]

and that's exactly what I felt and meant

[Buh4Bee]

I too enjoyed how you moved from the physical state to the spiritual state. A poem that should not be regarded as a little ditty, although it is only 6 lines long.

[Dinkleberry2010]

thank you for reading it