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Dark Muse
01-07-2010, 04:48 PM
The Meaning of Self

It was amid tangled sheets
and twisted limbs
she once hoped to transcend.

A desire undefined within
to be reborn again
through another's eyes.

Weighed down by the definitions
imposed upon her
from the outside.

Those who sat smoking in her den
spoke in a language
she couldn't quite comprehend.

But that it was of her they
spoke she knew
in their slitted glances.

And she became their creation
of multiple-syllabolic obscured words
which she wore as her albatross.

Then a stranger saw her
as something else, which
she couldn't quite believe in.

But she conceived he could change her
with the movement
of his limbs.

Yet in the end she had not become
the other self she sought
instead of gained she felt she lost.

Removed for a moment from
the verbal charades
she experienced weightlessness.

Sadly when restored back into the den
she long could not evade
their theatric word games.

So at last she decided
she really was just
jumbled pretentious slang.

Buh4Bee
01-07-2010, 05:25 PM
Funny and cute, reminds me of your last poem about a girl and her name.

Dark Muse
01-07-2010, 05:31 PM
Yes, they are similllar, and were inspired by the same source

Buh4Bee
01-07-2010, 06:00 PM
love them both

JackieGinger
01-07-2010, 06:15 PM
I find the importance you give to words and names in your poems really interesting,sorry to put it so bluntly, but where does this come from? Not that I don't like it, I do, honestly, I'm just curious.

Dark Muse
01-07-2010, 07:52 PM
This particular poem and The Girl and Her Name were both directly inspired by the short story Loulou, or The Domestic Life of the Language by Margaret Atwood, and well as you can probably guess by the title both names and language/words play an important role within the story and the shaping of the identity of the main character Loulou.