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lukelord
01-06-2010, 02:09 PM
I gave you my heart
You threw it away
Once you tore it apart
I refused to play.

Why can’t you understand?
I’m not lying to you
I just want to hold your hand
But you never do.

I found the parts of my heart
Piece by piece they went together
You never was that smart
I just wish they was that way forever

Now I know you hate me
We just weren’t meant to be
I guess I didn’t I see
You had the key

You always made the decisions
You held my heart
You made the final incision
And cut me apart

I regret what I did each day
Why did I let it go on?
I just wish I had the courage to say
Ill love you still from this day on

By Luke lord
06/01/10

Delta40
01-06-2010, 11:11 PM
I think the poem honestly reflects the initial pain of love lost.

lukelord
01-07-2010, 05:46 AM
its not neccessarly love lost but it is just general heartbreak

Pendragon
01-07-2010, 10:42 AM
I gave you my heart
You threw it away
Once you tore it apart
I refused to play.




Gad, the pathos of this is really touching!

Pensive
01-08-2010, 02:10 PM
Gad, the pathos of this is really touching!

I agree it's pretty touching.
The poem seems to describe the typical heartache of teenage, but I like it. :)