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Free Falcon
01-01-2010, 05:01 PM
My shiny moon ,
which enlights my nights
I adore your silver corona,
which captures my sight
as well as ,
it attracts my heart
I can`t withdraw my eyes
never feel bored
watching your light
Hey You my adorable moon
Don`t leave the sky
because through your shines
I discovered
the real meaning of life

free
01-03-2010, 03:03 PM
I like your poem because it expresses your, more than ordinary human, connection with celestial sphere and its inhabitants, like the moon to whom you are devoting every single word of your poem and thoughts. From my point of view, this is the most outstanding side of your work.