sinking

[Free Falcon]

I am sinking
Among the mysterious waves of beauty
Numerous waves of glory and shines
Which have never been dark
Neither cold, as the usual waves are
I am sinking not to drown
But to survive

Being touched by your beauty
I become immortal
And follow through the waves
The road toward your paradise

[Dinkleberry2010]

"I am sinking not to drown
But to survive"

I can't get over those lines. They are so striking; and they are are so original; as is the whole poem itself.

[Free Falcon]

"I am sinking not to drown
But to survive"

I can't get over those lines. They are so striking; and they are are so original; as is the whole poem itself.

Thank you Jermac for being so kind to read the poem and to write a comment
I am so happy to read your positive opinion
Thanks again

[Buh4Bee]

Well Free Falcon it is another poem very much after your own style. Whoever this muse is, she must be fabulous to inspire such honest poetry.

[Dinkleberry2010]

Free Falcon, you have an original voice, and an original way of saying things.

[Free Falcon]

Well Free Falcon it is another poem very much after your own style. Whoever this muse is, she must be fabulous to inspire such honest poetry.
You guess correctly Jersa :)
She is a really fabulous muse
Thank you for your reading and writing comments
Too kind of you