Fading Soul

[ur_shadow89]

My life is like a shattered mirror
Too many facets and reflections.
My hopes is like a broken wings
Left wondering & gone astray.
My soul is like the clouds
Moving and flying with ecstasy.

I, myself – I can’t see
I can’t touch,
I can barely feel.

My mind, my thoughts
Is fading like the billowing smoke
The anger, the thirst
Is building up & crushing me to death.

The self I once knew
Is now an illusion – I am buried 6 feet under
I was killed by the bullets of your words
And was struck by the sword of your action.

I see no more of myself
But a grain of sand
Being blown by the wind
Journeying to the unknown destiny…

No where.. No home… No more.

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[cute angel]

Hello ur shadow;

your poem is very nice full of emotions but I have an advice for you ,pay attention to the use of" to be" either plural or singular.

best of luck

keep it up

[Captain_Kuchiki]

The poem indeed evokes feelings of a person who is destroyed and no more. Good one.

[ur_shadow89]

to cute angel - thanks for your advice, i will be cautious next time.
to captain_kuchiki - many thanks for your comments.