A Short Poem...

[MorpheusSandman]

I've never been good
At writing such short poems
Maybe I'll practice

[Buh4Bee]

you should talk to hack...

[MorpheusSandman]

He inspired the piece. :D

[paperleaves]

That is awesome. I think there is such a beauty in the simplicity of brief poems, a holding back while letting go, if you will. keep posting your "practice" ^_^

[Dipen Guha]

TOLERANCE

A dog will pursue a rabbit./ It is its natural habit./ It runs to its full exhaustion./ There is its real satisfaction./ But, put the dog on a treadmill./ Off and on, serve it meal./ Now it is without its natural activity./ Angered, it does not want charity.

[free]

Your little poem made me laugh, not because I did not like it, on the contrary, it is excellent! Poetry does not have to be only romantic or serious, deep... it can, also, be humorous. Your three lines in a brief and clear way speak more about you than you could express in several couplets. Namely, they say that you are a witty, a clever person, with sense of humor, who likes poetry.

[tailor STATELY]

lol

reminds me of my first haiku in form

[hack]

Morph and jersea,
Thank you for the kind mention,
I only know so few words, to use
them frivolously seems such a sin.

As for you Morpheus:

practice to practice
practice can not make perfect
as in me, you see

[MorpheusSandman]

Thanks to paper, Dipen and free.

@hack: Ha! It would be funny if we could sustain a conversation in Haiku form!

Thanks for your response
All that's left to do is try
Or do, or do not*

*That ends the "Yoda Wisdom" part of our thread. :D

[Dipen Guha]

Mom ! here is the trophy, I won.
Cheer up ! Speak ! Come on !
"You are sweating, my son."