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hack
12-20-2009, 01:31 AM
times woven fabric
of fibers torn from Gods coat
twisted into now
MorpheusSandman
12-20-2009, 03:59 AM
Oooh, that's a great one. A superb metaphor developed in just 17 syllables; perfect!
Bar22do
12-20-2009, 07:41 AM
times woven fabric
of fibers torn from Gods coat
twisted into now

Hack it is a tiny but great Jewel! what an image! thanks
Buh4Bee
12-20-2009, 10:26 AM
Compliments to you!

Is this all we have, the now of God's torn garment
hack
12-21-2009, 12:24 AM
Thank you all for your read and your time.
~Sophia~
12-21-2009, 07:27 PM
God's coat... a lifetime of moments. Wonderful!