War Haiku

[Captain_Kuchiki]

Haiku poems about war


Conflict makes us hate
We wish our enemies dead
Because we hate them


Soldier lies dying
His flesh is rent by bullets
Another dead man

We are all now dead
Last thing we saw was fire
From the massive bomb

Smoke rises slowly
A village is torn apart
From the mortar fire

Ice-cold battleground
Soldiers cling to cold rifles
But the blood runs hot

We wait here at home
Hoping our heroes return
From the distant lands

A makeshift grave here
Just a crude memorial
To a casualty

March rank and file
We walk in step with others
We fight together

[cute angel]

Ohayou,

it's the first time I read a haiku poem

it's very nice indeed tells how wars are terrible how we wait for our heroes to come back ,sometimes they did and othertimes they just be dead

Aregatou gozaimasu

sogoi haiku

[Captain_Kuchiki]

Thanks, cute angel! I have posted another haiku collection here, and if you want to read that collection then visit my profile and check the threads I've started for "Everyday Haiku". =D

[cute angel]

Hai,I'll see

[Captain_Kuchiki]

Wait, it's actually "Some Haiku". I posted it under another name elsewhere hehe

[cute angel]

excuse me I don't get ya?

[Captain_Kuchiki]

Visit my profile and view all threads started by me and the Haiku one is labeled "Some Haiku". It's at the bottom of the list. Enjoy!

[Dinkleberry2010]

Four of the nine things you wrote are not haiku. Haiku is a form of verse written in seventeen syllables--no more or less.

[Buh4Bee]

I didn't count each stanza, but the concept is nice. Each little haiku is like a poem unto itself.

[cute angel]

Honestly I've read about Haiku but don't know how it is written coz I write free verses no more

[Captain_Kuchiki]

A haiku poem as three lines -- five syllables in the first, seven in the second, and five in the third. There can be any number of actual words as long as the number of syllables is correct.

[Dinkleberry2010]

In four of the nine there are not seventeen syllables, therefore they are not haiku

[Captain_Kuchiki]

Ok, I did a sylalble check and everything is kosher now.