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heroman
12-16-2009, 02:08 PM
hey



i wanna just ya help me


if you please, i need a long sentece.
i tried more than one time to write it, but it was a serise of senteces.

so, who can help me write a long sentece about anything !

a trip
being a teacher
current life ! or so forth !


plz plz, need it soon:bawling:

heroman
12-16-2009, 02:29 PM
comd on !!


where are ya guys !

Chilly
12-17-2009, 06:53 PM
Write out everything you want in the sentence then we'll help you put it together.

Also, if you want to be able to write entire paragraphs as sentences, read as much as can; Dickens is a great place to start; you should also learn the rules of commas and semi-colons if you want to improve; it's not as hard as it looks.

Dinkleberry2010
12-18-2009, 03:44 PM
You could dip into a Faulkner novel and find any number of long sentences.

MANICHAEAN
12-19-2009, 04:41 AM
FOR HEROMAN:
So there I was at this party in North London, dancing away with this drop dead Oriental chick and we got on so well that as the evening changed to early morn, our eyes met & she whispered in my ear "Your place or mine?" and before I knew it I was on a plane to Hong Kong.

cranberry
12-19-2009, 10:36 AM
Manichaean : This is wow , :) i liked it :) nice chosen words are they urs?

MANICHAEAN
12-19-2009, 01:22 PM
Cranberry.
You should know a word by the company it keeps.
Greetings from the other side of the Gulf in Qatar.
Hows the cooking man?
Best regards.
Manichaean.