The Curse

[Alexander III]

Revolutionize greatness, slay the beast and claim divinity[/CENTER]

[Bar22do]

Alexander III, you vibrate with poetry as you breathe; and you too have the intuition of man (stolen) right to be immortal... I love your poem and thank you. There is one word, if you allow me, that to me feels too long or not meet: "revolutionize" (maybe "seize" or "take" "embody"... ) (ah, and not "manny" but "many" but it is only a typo).

[PrinceMyshkin]

Wonderful Jeremiad, thank you!

[Alexander III]

Thank you both for such delightful compliments. Bar22do I actually had not even taken notice of revolutionize until you pointed it out but now that I look at it, I believe you are right and it appears to be to long. I shall see to try to adjust it, I always appreciate criticism as it does truly help.

[Dr Jekyll]

Congratulations on the wonderful poem! Truly remarkable.:thumbs_up

[Buh4Bee]

Written well, along the lines of epic poetry. Yes, man does desire to attain immortality, marvelous themes- youth and invincibility.

[Mrig]

It's magical...