About Eden

[hack]

The Gardener

and west of Eden
from high in an apple tree
I see foreign Gods

Alone(with God)

and above Eden
no unanswered prayer rises
love undivided

But Wait

and below Eden
a chasm empty of souls
and a nascent flame

Cimarron

and leaving Eden
the cool stream of God's reason
pools and disappears

[Bar22do]

but this one is simply perfect! inspired and inviting to be still and ponder...

[Buh4Bee]

Nicely done.
These lines are very comforting:

and above Eden
no unanswered prayer rises
love undivided