Last Vision

[ur_shadow89]

Your silence awakens my dying soul
As you gave me strength when you breathed your last
I clasped your hand as I tried to see your face
But my vision was so vague, so haze.

I heard you whisper something to my ear
But so faint, so soft, so muffled I can’t hear
I tried to get closer, closer to you most
Yet so weak, so crippled, no strength to hold.

Can anyone hear my plea?
Can anyone hear the voice in me?
My heart pounded so hard and this maybe my last
As my breath comes too slow....
I see you and me…


Finally.

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[white camellia]

This is very moving, ur_shadow, that I can almost hear that plea... Last vision, is the one that lasts forever.

[Mrig]

It's painful!

What I imagined is.... two people in pain looking at each other ...close to death! both die and again see each other finally in the oblivian

[ur_shadow89]

Many thanks to you both White Camillia and Mrig for your heartfelt comment.