Time

[Dr Jekyll]

The loose earth falls
So heavily and yet so deeply
Through the soft and sleepy meadow
Arranging a composition
Of rays of time travelling on a bush of hand grown raspberries
That looks down on these soft pillows of the sea,
That looks so keenly at the spectacles of history and justice,
Portraying this house
So feebly and yet so passionately,
As it walks on the sands of all these centuries.

*(This is a poem I wrote a couple of months ago. Please tell me your thoughts of it :redface: )

[hoope]

hey there!
am glad i am the first to reply ... its really a lovely poem .. though short
it made me go & imagine the whole thing.. well written
try writing more .... see ya around

[Dr Jekyll]

Thanks hoope.