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ur_shadow89
12-10-2009, 05:13 AM
A vision of you, I see
I’m holding you while you’re holding me,
I feel your warmth embrace, your loving touch
I hope this day will forever last.

I keep you close, to I feel you near
With every breath and heartbeat so dear,
We looked into each others eyes, then smiled
I held your face then you closed your eyes.

A tear fell but not from our eyes
It’s not of loneliness, but of joy inside
It’s been a while since I saw you last
Oh how I wish, we never part.

I wish, this be reality
I wish this is true
I wish this is not a dream
I wish this will come true.

As I opened my eyes
I felt so alone and desolate
But I’ll forever keep you, my love,
The vision of you, loving me.



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blazeofglory
12-10-2009, 07:45 AM
Your words are really soothing and full of lustrous ideas. The expression of love like this generates from a person who has undergone the experience of intense love. Have you?

ur_shadow89
12-10-2009, 09:09 AM
Your words are really soothing and full of lustrous ideas. The expression of love like this generates from a person who has undergone the experience of intense love. Have you?

Thanks for the comment blaze. I guess I do have alot of love in me that I wanted to share it with someone but i can only put it into words :)

hoope
12-10-2009, 09:44 AM
WoW.. very romantic and a one lovely poem
enjoyed reading it
keep writing and waiting for more .

ur_shadow89
12-10-2009, 09:58 AM
thanks hoope... im glad you've liked my poems.. and i'll be posting more soon.

PrinceMyshkin
12-10-2009, 12:29 PM
Hopefully, putting it into words will prove to be the first step toward putting it into action. Good luck.

ur_shadow89
12-10-2009, 01:33 PM
yes hopefully soon.. thanks Prince :)

Buh4Bee
12-10-2009, 09:23 PM
good luck!