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haymanali
12-03-2009, 05:31 PM
I always feel and hear
This fascinating song
Passionate and perfumed
Of your voluptuous flesh
Amorous and tender
Wander so slowly

Between my heartbeats
And my diaphanous dreams
Your silky smooth breath
Deep and warm softly whispers

Through your sweet words of love
And your hesitant, timid kisses
Lingering still on the misty lips
Of my evanescent, secret dreams

inbetween
12-12-2009, 05:16 PM
oooohh that's heavy and sweet..like a southern summer's night .. I like it

Bar22do
12-12-2009, 05:30 PM
So romantic and sensual! bravo!

Buh4Bee
12-12-2009, 10:20 PM
Make me want to crawl into bed with a good trash novel. Please don't take me remark as a reflection on your poem, it is not trashy in the least, just voluptuous.

haymanali
12-15-2009, 01:49 PM
@ inbetween

@ Bar22do

@ jersea

Thanks a lot for your pleasant and warm comments.