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hack
12-02-2009, 12:19 PM
In the desert there are lake beds
With their lakes gone ten thousand years
That might teach us all a lesson
About how life should value fears

When you look down on the playa
You think that nothing could grow there
But there are creatures in hard cases
That would make liars of your stare

There are many little lives there
God only knows from whence they came
Four hundred million years they've lived
Yet some who dwell there have no name

There are desert shrimp and Triops
That house such tiny little brains
You might think them incapable
Of predicting hard summer rains

But when monsoon waters pool there
Although it brews a brine with salts
A million little souls awake
Their salad dreams the water halts

If we left our own hard cases
In the harsh heat of some plain
Perhaps we too could rejoice when
Our lives awoke to pouring rain

tailor STATELY
12-02-2009, 03:37 PM
"If we left our own hard cases
In the harsh heat of some plain
Perhaps we too could rejoice when
Our lives awoke to pouring rain"

I love the allegory your poem weaved to my understanding. We all know adversity will come at some time. Best to thank our creator for our opportunity for growth; for we are at our best when we overcome our trials.

hack
12-02-2009, 04:51 PM
Thank you cousin, exactamente.

Bar22do
12-02-2009, 07:06 PM
I feel in it also a sort of invitation to surrender, to let go and to trust, patiently... it "pays" - - - I witnessed, in January of a desert, outbursts of millions anemones' blossom which transformed hills and plaines into a kingly carpet of red and green....
What a beautiful, beautiful poem...