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free
12-01-2009, 08:14 PM
Boredom that I am used to.
Glow of the screen.
Coming of an unknown morning.
Books on the table.
(One more chance to
get my answer - failed)
Music that fills the soul,
phone that empties pocket.
Love full of doubts...
Promisses of a missions impossible.
A humiliating astrology
saying: “You will spend
a romantic evening with someone nice”...
meaning.... you from nowhere,
I guess...

Delta40
12-01-2009, 08:38 PM
This is beautiful and I love how each line lets me gasp with hope only to expel it with a sorrowful sigh!

~Sophia~
12-01-2009, 08:41 PM
Oh man... I get this..... completely (wish I didn't) Great Job!

firefangled
12-02-2009, 12:16 AM
I liked the matter-of-factness of this. Very much your own. The ending took me by surprise in a good way.

free
12-06-2009, 04:13 PM
Thank you all. I am really flattered by your comments.