PDA

View Full Version : Cycle of Life



Delta40
12-01-2009, 07:53 PM
I felt the ache loom
triggering tendersweet pain
It throbbed like a yearning desire
to be free
to have flow
so I could let go
and be human once more

cogs
12-01-2009, 08:21 PM
this seems to be on the brink of crying. i'm thankful for poetry that allows abstract expression of human motivations.

~Sophia~
12-01-2009, 08:23 PM
This is exactly why I'm in Paris now! The ache for more! Thank you!

Delta40
12-02-2009, 05:12 AM
Thank you. I want to write something that could have a broad interpretation because of diversity.

Bar22do
12-02-2009, 07:19 AM
..."so I could let go
and be human once more"

or be ever more human...